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Fate

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It's not up to me
It's out of my control
Whether it's meant to be
Or destined for defeat

We seem to have a heart
But it has a mind of its own
'Caus no matter what I do
It doesn't want to calm down

They told us we could fight
We should never give up
But whatever happens
It's not up to us

So I just sit back
And let fate unfold
'Caus I'm tired of fighting
Is there even hope?
Whatever happens
I'll believe what I've been told
That in the end
I won't be so cold
Grr, I have to stop saying 'Caus... All well. Heh heh... :fork: XD
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Zevais's avatar
I never found anything wrong with writing fake words that are the literal translation of what we would say. It adds some personality.

I use "Grrr" instead of growl and other onomatopeia in songs and poems because I find it more appropriate, better sounding, and more personally me. If it feels right, keep on doing it. I enjoy your work.